So for our second activity of semester 2 we were to gather together a random selection of 3 images and hand them out to several people to see if they could make a connection between the 3 in the form of a short story. I used the website www.sxc.hu to generate my random images.
The stories I got from my first experiment are:
Female/52/unemployed
The little girl is on the beach, looking back at the promenade, as she scans along she sees the empty deck chairs with no one sitting on them and at her eyes move towards the end of the prom there is a bike sitting at the end of the wall.
Female/16/School Student
Orphan girl with no money, which is the reason for the oversized bike, as it was handed down to her because she couldn't afford her own and because she is an orphan that's the reason for her being alone at the beach and no one sitting in the deck chairs.
Female/19/Design Student
Girl cycled to the beach, had a play about and relaxed afterwards by sitting on the deck chairs.
Male/52/Strategic Account Director
Girl from a poor background gets this bike for her christmas and as she is standing on the beach she is dreaming of holidays abroad, getting somewhere exotic but unfortunately ends up still in the uk.
Female/82/Pensioner
Girl walked onto the beach seen an empty chair thought to herself, 'have a seat' sat there for a while had a sleep then woke up bit bored walked along the promenade and seen the bike and no one around, so decided to have a sneaky wee shot.
Female/21/Medical Student
The little girl was visiting her gran and grampa's house, which was near the sea, she got all wrapped up nice and warm got on her bike and cycled to the beach where they sat on the deck chairs eating ice cream all afternoon... until sadly it was time to go home.
This last story I used as my target story for part 2 of the assignment, where I was to add an additional image of my own choice to show to different people to try and get a
desired response and story I wanted. This was my 4th image.
The stories I got from this section are:
Male/48/Sports Development Officer
This is blackpool on a good day, and the two OAP's are down for there annual holiday, and this is there first day without rain(observation about this deckchair being an iconic image of a british holiday destination deck chair) and the bike belongs to a neighbour of the pensioners who is believed to be french and out selling his onions around his neck on his bike (another observation about seeing only one wheel of the bike, does this mean he only ever made it to half of his journeys?! ) The couple are celebrating their anniversary and the card they are reading is from there granddaughter, who seems quite content with playing on the beach, without a care in the world just thinking of the colour of her dress when she becomes a princess......
Female/20/Sports and Active LIfestyle Planning Student
Little girl rode her bike to the seaside met a boy fell in love and this is them when they are old and happily married for years.
Female/15/School Student
Little girl get a bike for her christmas/birthday goes to the beach to try it out and falls in love and they get old together.
The above two stories are from close family friends and the two girls are sister but I asked them both in separate rooms and I was really shocked to see such a similar story between them.
Male/49/Civil Servant
Little girl sent a thank you card to her grandparents for her bike and is reminiscing of the times they spent together on holiday riding their bikes along the beach.
Female/19/Design Student
Little girl staying with her grandparents in sunny foreign country and loves sitting on the beach with them but is missing riding her bike back home.
Female/48/Radiographer
Man and woman are grandparents who live far away and they have just received a card from their grandaughter talking of there holidays spent on the beach sitting on the deck chairs and the bike is something old and left in the garage, belonging to one of the grandparents and hasn't been out in ages.
After this second stage I still hadn't got the story I wanted, so for the third part we were to add words to the images or just a word in general to try and achieve this story. I think putting in the image of the grandparents reading from a card confused a few people so I then decided to remove the image and just use the word 'Grandparents' instead.
My results of this section are:
Female/53/Retired
Young girl is standing looking at her grandparents puzzled by their conversation. The couple are reminiscing about the good old days when they cycled together around the town and spent many lazy days sitting in the sun. How things have changed they say to the little girl, these days no one seems to be able to take time out from their busy lives to enjoy time in their loved one’s company without electronic gadgets and gizmos getting in the way. One thing hasn’t changed though, they say.....let’s go for an ice cream!
Female/19/Geography Student
the little girl decided that her bike was too old to ride anymore so when her grandparents took her on holiday she decided to sell it so she could buy a sun lounger instead to get a nice tan.
Male/18/Product Design and Engineering Student
Blackpool was packing up the seats from another busy day in july. The bikes were packed up in the shed, donkeys in the stable, ice crem in the vans. One thing however was left outside. susie was left at the waters edge with the tide coming in, looking up at the pier, where her grandparents were, being attacked by seagulls for their fish and chips. Susie got no chips that day, but she did get a stick of rock.
Female/20/History Student
The grandparents take their grandaughter to the beach, while she is sitting on a deckchair they took her bike for a ride but it goes into the sea meaning the bike chain fell off, hence the crying girl ..
Male/20/Learning Technology Administrator
One sunny afternoon a little girl and her Grandparents took went down to the beach and she took her bike, when they arrived she left her bike against a wall so she could go and play on the sand, while her grandparents sat on the chairs soaking up the sun. While she was playing on the sand she looked up and saw clouds that looked like animals so decided she was going to guess the shapes
After all three sections of this experiment I was still to get my desired story. I got some very close stories, but nothing exactly what I had used as my target story. If I had to re-do it I would go back to the second stage and use a photograph with grandparents in it without a card or letter, because I feel this influenced peoples focus in the photograph whereas I was just wanting people to focus on the grandparents themselves. This is why I then removed this photo in section three and just replaced with the word 'grandparents' however, this still didn't really work and I think I would need to add one more word to get my story, probably the word 'holiday' or 'visiting.'
I think this experiment was really interesting with seeing how much just adding and taking away words really changed a story. I was also impressed with the similarities in certain stories within my own family and then with people of the same or similar age and then the extreme differences and perspectives of others. Just shows to you how differently a group of people all perceive the same selection of photographs, and how you can influence their opinion with the simply task of adding a word. This shows how powerful a tool this is, and you can understand why it is used in advertising and how it is so successful.